Some good research into this opening sequence and the conventions it employs Zainab. Well done. You should be looking at how you use ICT and how you present your blog, so images to illustrate your examples are key to improving this. Also be aware of making 'authoritative' statements like 'most thrillers begin with a dark setting at night'... unless you can quote a source or you can give a wide range of examples. It would be better to say, out of the 10 thrillers I researched, nine of them opened with a night shot... Level 2 Research
Some good research into this opening sequence and the conventions it employs Zainab. Well done. You should be looking at how you use ICT and how you present your blog, so images to illustrate your examples are key to improving this. Also be aware of making 'authoritative' statements like 'most thrillers begin with a dark setting at night'... unless you can quote a source or you can give a wide range of examples. It would be better to say, out of the 10 thrillers I researched, nine of them opened with a night shot... Level 2 Research
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