SCREENPLAY
LOCATION 1: HARRY'S room. It has a large window with a view of the street, including MR. KARK'S
house. The room should be slightly messy so that it can coincide with the stereotypical room
teenager.
LOCATION 2: MR KARK'S living room. It should be extremely tidy and have all the normal things that
anybody's living room would have. This is representative of his character; seems completely
normal on the outside but hides deep and disturbing secrets.
LOCATION 3: The street on which the houses which are involved are on.
LOCATION 1-NIGHT
HARRY is in his wheelchair and the camera zooms in as he falls asleep.
BLACKOUT
MONTAGE:
LOCATION 1- NIGHT
MR KARK and DATE 1 walking along the street and into his house.
LOCATION 2- NIGHT
MR KARK and DATE 1 clinking wine glasses together, they are smiling and laughing.
BLACKOUT
Sounds of the glasses dropping and DATE 1 screaming.
LOCATION 2- NIGHT
A view of MR KARK'S feet walking away and then the audience will see the whole room and DATE 1 is lying dead on the floor.
BLACKOUT
Planning of your locations is effective and the characters are clearly described, although in the resulting film there is little dialogue and indication of how you are building each character. Level 3 planning.
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